ext_7235 ([identity profile] rebcake.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] abelina 2009-11-04 07:10 am (UTC)

I'd be willing to stomp on Roger's instep, if Buffy would rather not.

Great start. Very action-packed, with good characterization all 'round.

As to title, since it the Duke of Edgewater, how about Edge of ______________ something-or-other. Sword? Dignity? Whatever theme you might have coming up?
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